The Swordsmith Poem by Kwai Chee Low

The Swordsmith

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He stood before the blistering forge,
where coals burned blazing red-hot,
like molten lava the ore from the gorge.
Long he had ferreted and sought.

Sweating, oblivious to the stifling heat,
he struck his hammer again.
Sparks flew and flashed where steel and hammer met,
a rhythmic staccato refrain.

He obsessed from dawn until dusk,
to create the perfect sword.
Munching insipidly on a hot rusk,
in between prayers to the lord.

His wife left him to his obsession,
a lonely score year ago.
He needed no family or possession,
his dream alone set him aglow.

Saturday, May 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is inspired by the ancient swordsmiths who toiled long and hard, and enduring insufferable hardships and sacrifices to create the perfect sword.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cigeng Zhang 21 June 2016

Actually a man is his own swordsmith to his life. his dream alone set him aglow - a wonderful line.

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Kwai Chee Low 21 June 2016

You're right, Cigeng. We all are 'smiths' in accordance to our dreams and aspirations.

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Ancient sword smiths who made wonderful sharp swords to use in wars were skilled ones and now the new generations are opted for other jobs. A good poem.

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Kwai Chee Low 15 May 2016

Thank you.

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