Time has released its newer
verson of the secrets to my soul
Your old version has captured the
stage for the novel of my soul to
carry its story into lifes ending channel
Although the memories are as fresh
as the day we gave birth to them, time
has been interviening with a differnt tone
Newer chapters have been added to insure
the protection of its contents, all the names
have not been changed, as the innocence
of its origin has always been harbored so
carefully
Never have we each stopped, or ended a
single chapter of love, but have marinated it
with the volumes that have binded our souls
till the eternity of its existance
Author of Love for sure would
only be a suitable title, volume two......
It is wonderful how you have constructed this work into such a beautiful love story. well done Bonnie. Love, Andrew x
A beaming example of your keen ability to take-on unordinary themes, and deliver crisp, erudite expression.....Sterling work, young lady, indeed! ~ F j R ~ __2008__
Hand in hand i walked through this beauty with love at my side, stunning work
Bonnie, your poems are unique. You have such a style of writting. I get so relaxed and feel so much love while I read them. You have a unique talent, and not only for writtinh, but to make people happy too. Love, Ana
lovely love....love brigs in freshness till the end..great write thank you
Bonnie, I really like this. I like your theme and the way you have woven it throughout your poem. A 10 for sure. Regards Ron
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This was a beautiful poem. So very heartfelt.