August Leading... Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

August Leading...

Rating: 5.0


The shadows were closing in...
But then, came mention, from a good friend
...Caressed by the summer sun,
Taken in, by the nights that you send!

Where is it that you are taking me?
...The screen has decreed our Zen,
I shall not fight our fated day-
...But, I shall ask you, when?

So hypnotized and in a trance-
...mesmerized for all to see,
Your magic Spell, has done very well...
But where is it, that your leading me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theodora Onken 01 September 2007

LOL, Marci... These are genuine feelings, that i have been feeling for about a month...dunno why! But it is September... And i just have been having so many mystical-epihanies! ! ! For lack of any better words...what is it, when you are familiar with everything, and the things that someone says or does are in exact tune with yours? That is what is going on with me right now! Glad you liked this! Have a grand night, and try to get tome sleep. its late...early morning... Theo :) xo, and a smile!

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x... x... 01 September 2007

Their, not there.... an oopppsss moment.

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x... x... 01 September 2007

Wherever it is, sounds as if it could be beyond delightful. What a grand end to August with all the hope and promise of 'See You In September.' This is also wonderful, but then, what else would it be. This just sounds so cozy and yummy. Makes one wish it were there awaited promise.~~~marci.xo~~

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Theodora Onken 01 September 2007

dear david and Lilly, Thank you so much! These are simply a true flow of feelings...coming from within me... Atr a time in my life where so much that is happening is mystical. Best regards, my friends, Theo

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David Harris 01 September 2007

Theo, this an interesting poem and a equally interesting question you poise. Very eloquent flow to this my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing it. David

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