When the recession of opportunities
Knock downs, towns and cities;
When the flood of tension
Hits alike, huts and mansions;
When anxiety tortures life's moments
And men wallows in teary torments;
When life is anything but easy
And only head shrinkers seems busy
Then, oh! Men
It is time to stand still
As ancient hills
of indomitable will
Which braves
Fiery storms
And wintry chills:
And your audacious hope
Should strive to climb
steep recession's slope,
tightly holding
divine grace's rope
Till in boom
The flood of recession wanes
Clouds of opportunities rains
And mad lives again becomes sane.
Dr Hitesh C Sheth
28/02/2009
Dr., you are right. Recession subdues audacious hope and revokes love for the Lord. Good poetry. CP
thanks alot for sharing. this is a nice, true and thought provoking poem. really enjoyed your deep thoughts.
this recession is not fully true...since the boom or the bullish trend before was'nt also fully true...the common people had fallen a pray to the boom which snayched their money to fill someone's booty...genuinity is what will pullus out
Beautiful poem to lift up any body's spirit. Enjoyed reading it.
Shashendra Amalshan (8/3/2009 2: 08: 00 AM) | Delete this message Hello sir, 'When anxiety tortures life’s moments And men wallows in teary torments; When life is anything but easy And only head shrinkers seems busy' I should say when this kinda thing happens, turn to Dr Hitesh Sith, cause he will always heal you with his poetic therapies 'And your audacious hope Should strive to climb steep recession’s slope, tightly holding divine grace’s rope' I like these expressions too.... Lot to think here, .. I think you'v expressed yourself in a very poetic and creative manner.. A psychologist can always gives you treatments, but not many can do it in such a innovative way I think.. Great talent indeed Splendid write... with loves shan
Wow, this poem captivated me from the title. Its well thought out and thouught provoking. I loved the ending. Till in boom The flood of recession wanes Clouds of opportunities rains And mad lives again becomes sane. The audacity of hope. Love it, thank you so much for sharing your talent with us :)
And such is the boom and bust spell that we live under! Very nicely put - I like the cynical hit at the end - yes it's all insane. Mark
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice poem contented with a nice message, poemwise is also too good, impressived, thanks dear Dr.Hitesh,10++