At The Poolside Poem by Indira Renganathan

At The Poolside

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Above were a few birds hovering
And an airplane passing

My grand-daughter put on her swim dress
And cap

She then put on her goggles
Wet herself under the tap

She plunged into the azure water
Began swimming

That day was quite sunny and hot
Even at 5 pm

That solitary silence and solitude
I always welcome

I too put on my goggles and plunged
Into the azure

All the strokes my grand-little did
I too did

But the way She enjoyed was different
From the way I did

As none else was there to watch me
I was all at ease

All wrong strokes..yet I could
Inebriate that solitary azure

That trance of bliss afloat
Was I away from the real

"That's it granny", moments later
Little girl nudged me

How could she know that I too was swimming
Hers was real, mine was virtual

But you know my imageries, I'm sure
As a poet

Tuesday, September 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 May 2023

I always welcome that solitary silence and solitude.....peace of mind is so crucial. An excellent poem dear madam.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 November 2017

How could she know that I too was swimming Hers was real, mine was virtual........................great poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2017

Both you and your little grand daughter enjoyed the poolside but her was something difference. She plunged into the azure water and did swim was real. You were in trance and in virtual. Dear madam this has been so nicely inscribed by you. Let it be quoted... But the way She enjoyed was different From the way I did . '/////////////// That's it granny', moments later Little girl nudged me How could she know that I too was swimming Hers was real, mine was virtual But.... you know my imageries, I'm sure As a poet. Beautiful poem shared Thanks for sharing.

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