Manonton Dalan

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....At Beautiful Day - Poem by Manonton Dalan

banana shape parachute
lifting a flightless surfer as
she navigates unforgiving
waves; at times brushing
her feet; mostly airborne
kite-surfers aerophibians

we sit there watching show
some tumbles, some sinks
but coming up alright, neat
body-boarders none on sight
jet skis slice, rush for rescue
nothing serious, it's a show

Comments about ....At Beautiful Day by Manonton Dalan

  • Rookie Crisostomo Ibarra (7/3/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    This is a fun poem to read. Nicely done! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 28, 2011

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