Art Of Touch Poem by lady grace

Art Of Touch

Rating: 4.8


the touch of your fingers
the softness of your hands
memories of the past
buried gently in my mind...

how I miss those days
when your lips met mine
when my fingers dropp to your hairy chest
moving softly as you close your eyes......

how I miss those times
when we both made our promises
to enjoy the sweetness of companionship
with our grown up boys and girls......

but life is cruel
you left me with bundle of memories
even the art of sands can’t help
to wipe all those traces....

not even the brightest night
can cure my solitude
can ignore the hidden tears
sleeping alone at night...

how I miss those moments
where you always whisper “I love you”
with your busy fingers around me
with my naughty words 'i love you too'...

and as I saw the fact
that alone I am alive
where only the sounds i hear
and the mirror-behind lights…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 05 November 2009

My goodness...when my fingers dropp to your hairy chest, allowing your busy fingers, explore every part of me your naughty poem will give me a heart attack... Well this part of the poem made me jump up in the air... well done...only one thing I can argue is this line... 'even the sands of time can’t help, to wipe all those marks.'... I felt it sould of been the sands of art....sands of time is sands that fall from the hour glass....and you can't get it back.... Naughty poem...I love these kinds of poem especially when they are expressed like this poetic... cheers...10+

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Fay Slimm 05 November 2009

Touch certainly is an art, and this lovely but sad poem epitomises the art most beautifully..... thank you for sharing it....

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im sorry.. his lost.. this poem is good.. really good.

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Akram Awadat 08 November 2009

so beautiful liens, sweet poem and sweet description cheers 10+

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2009

how I miss those days when we both made our promises to grow and enjoy the sweetness of companionship with our grown up kids...... but life is cruel you left me with bundle of memories even the art of sands can’t help to wipe all those marks................... What to remember and what to forget only you go near and beget eyes slowly raise level and meet head simply shake and crumble the feet to deceive somebody is not at all art you may prove intelligent and look smart days may not be far when you have to part let love grow not fast as train but as cart memory may not be rubbed of fade not easy to say bye and farewell bade sand may not witness what we promised life may reveal what actually we missed

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Susan Cook 06 November 2009

You express emotions in words beautifully. xxx

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Catrina Heart 06 November 2009

but life is cruel you left me with bundle of memories even the art of sands can’t help to wipe all those marks.... ---- your soul mate is weeping by reading this piece...........well done! ! ! ! ! !

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Ency Bearis 06 November 2009

with the touch- memory still lingers..and the yearning of the lost soul mate... such a wonderful poem well expressed openly.....10

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