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Ejaz Khan
(9/11/2009 11:53:00 AM) |
A poem both intense and meaningful, rich imagery and clear message, you have narrated so many different things in a beautiful way, very nice write!
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rago rago
(7/6/2009 5:27:00 AM) |
how nice to read a curse from an angle...... sometimes also love and affection on us....please donot curse us.......... very beautiful.......... to differenct topic....
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Jack Price
(7/5/2009 11:20:00 PM) |
All I can say is this is a great poem. I lose myself in your imagery and it makes this poem so believalbe.
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Kristina B; Williams
(6/29/2009 7:02:00 PM) |
i swear we must of dated the same m.f., cuz word by word you sum up me n his relationship up to a tee...adding a few more, promise they are secure..spent all night ordering systems to perfect me from all this wierd stuff..10, for curese of an angel
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Rosalita Fernandez
(6/27/2009 6:46:00 PM) |
Wow- this is amazing! truely amazing. powerful! 10 plus
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Rafique Farooqi
(6/25/2009 11:57:00 PM) |
the poem is with beautiful structure and word placed skillfully.......10+
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L.P. Alexanders
(6/25/2009 2:49:00 PM) |
i loved it, great content and message
keep up the good work! !
10++
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Rebecca Harvey
(6/23/2009 7:58:00 PM) |
Grace i think you are someone a little like me you have been hurt by someone you lived and thought they loved you and also like you i put my emotions and feelings in to my poetry and not take my pain out on people i would love it if you could read my poems just look under poets and my name and you can look at the ones i have wrote and you can tell me what you think and see what i mean
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Ravi A
(6/23/2009 11:17:00 AM) |
After our death what will happen to planet earth? It doesn't matter to anyone who is dead. One day this planet will dissolve with the universe. Another cycle would begin. A good poem.
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