! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Art Of Selective Vision- Senryu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Art Of Selective Vision- Senryu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Dustbin goes blue, grass
Littered with peel; revellers
colour blind, walk past...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 14 December 2009

how color blindedness can hamper the vision (and not sight) is truly captured here...loaded with meaning..your words do the magic again...

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Kesav Easwaran 08 March 2010

This reads more than a Senryu...much insight into this piece... Art of selective phrasing...10

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Allemagne Roßmann 07 February 2010

But some people are partially colourblind Some people cannot identify and distinguish colour or shades of blue--we call them teal in UK what is sky-blue catchy term in India, in Italy-Azure deep blue is Turquoise in UK and it varies from place to place pale blue is Light Teal....................in that sense So if some1 have had my sensibility in the dustbin of blue-i won't be worth grass littered in peel--a good emphatic write

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Sandra Fowler 23 December 2009

But your creative vision is always 20/20, dear Mamta. Perception is a gift, after all. Merry Christmas. Love, Sandra

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 December 2009

again a senryu well defined

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Ranjit Ravindran 14 December 2009

Nice perspective... Liked the style.

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