Appreciated Effort Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Appreciated Effort



Examining him from head to toe,
But, i've my own worries to share with you;
However, she saw love in him and couldn't stop looking.
Examining him from head to toe,
But, i can't shoulder your problems as well;
For, his skin was as young as a boy.
Appreciated effort,
With love, scope and imaginations;
Appreciated effort,
With sharply defined muscles over his torso;
And, that's the love that she finds in him.
Very handsome, very lovely;
Of an appreciated effort to the one she loves!
Very pretty, very lovely;
Of an appreciated effort to the one she loves!
But, what we do and, how we do it is all in the name of love,
'Ah, mademoiselle'!
The voice of the man to the curious woman;
As she saw love by examining him from head to toe.
He is really a poet and, the inevitable occurred! !
Dressed in a flowing lavender gown to approach the man;
Ah! Their love met with a kiss.
'Oh my dear'! 'Oh my dear'! !
She finally managed to say words like these;
But, the human brain of his man is very far ahead of mankind.
On this case! !
I'm not certain but only hopeful;
'You are mine and mine only'! were the very words out of her mouth;
As she finally found love by examining him from head to toe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 17 September 2008

I love the word use which creates a clear image of him. Lovely write.

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