Apparently The Life Expectancy Of An Insect Greatly Decreases If You Leave Him Locked Within A Cupboard Poem by Malcolm Bacchus

Apparently The Life Expectancy Of An Insect Greatly Decreases If You Leave Him Locked Within A Cupboard

Rating: 5.0


In the Kitchen cupboard
The Fruit Fly
Has died of old age

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 09 February 2009

you're titles are a blast... they're even longer than your poems!

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Mifael Llauderes 09 February 2009

we are but fruitflies in a larger scale... only with more documented complications. creative piece.

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Vinod Kumar 08 February 2009

Fruitful poem but the fly died without got a smell of a fruit(Poverty?) thanks for sharing.10+

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Florence P. Wordsmith 02 February 2009

This really got me thinking about the fragility of my own existence. One minute we're here, the next we're dead. Good one.

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Patti Masterman 02 February 2009

This is sort of like the zen of insect poems! I like it very much.

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