Apiphobia (A Trigee) Poem by Dawn Slanker

Apiphobia (A Trigee)

Rating: 4.5


For those unfamiliar with the 'trigee' form...you read the left half, then the right half, then follow the dots read the two halves together as a whole. It's 3 poems in one. The trick is that each of the 3 parts should be able to stand alone as a poem.

The Trigee form was created by TD Euwaite, founder of poetsofmars.com

Apiphobia

wicked wing*ed creatures..............evil stingers flit and race,
dartin' through the veggie patch.....they quickly set a rapid pace
they target tender features..............while buzzin' 'round my fearful face
'cause I am an easy catch...............they tease and then begin the chase

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Viola Grey 12 July 2008

this trigee thing is something new to me...and it's very cool...I really don't think I could do this, so you have my utmost respect...very well written.

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Chuck Audette 12 July 2012

Enjoyed this form of poetry, although I just came here from your trigee Free Choice which is even more clever! (Or cleaver, as PT D might say) .

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Ivor Hogg 14 August 2008

A new form to me but it excites my imagination Thoroughly enjoyed ivor

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Tia Metcher 06 August 2008

'Hi! ', your a wonderful poet. This is an excellent Trigee. you have done well on this. WELL DONE! Cheers :)

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Frank Cannon 29 July 2008

Tri... umphant trigee.

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Melissa Casteen 13 July 2008

I've not seen this type of poetry before, but I enjoyed reading it. Very creative and unconventional. I may give this Trigee a try myself- thanks for sharing! ^_^

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