Another Work In Progress Poem by A.E.K.G Navrilith

Toothpaste and brandy, half nine in the morning, just another one of those nights, where nothing goes right. Now i feel as rough as a badgers', head throbin'; throught colgin', what did i do to diserve this? you seem perfect poet...thats why doing poems perfectly and professionally..really enjoy your work..good job... like the way you do in short form..and very much meaningful... liked it 10/10

interesting...concocotion, well done

I think I know what you did. ha ha. Loved this poem. Good one; D

Too much excitement through intoxication is not good for the body.Beautiful works Nav.

so nice and appriciated job there Luwi

good write well written

Extraordinary and beautiful.10.