The Bad time never informs us of arrival,
Sometimes we become so much care less,
Particularly in a house where there are the kids,
We need to be more than careful my friends,
The mobile charger was plugged on in the socket
The cute little baby put the charger in her mouth,
And she died of electric shock she'll not come back,
Hope my friends may be careful in future!
The Bad time never informs us of arrival, Sometimes we become so much care less, ...a reminder for all...nice
So sad.... We never anticipate such a thing! Let this poem help parents to take sufficient precaution! A moving write!
yeah heard of this instance recently n it sent shivers in my spine....yes some things go un-noticed and are totally un-intentional....to become the reason for taking away the life of a toddler
sad but many mothers are careless as they can't visualise what can happen do read my two poems moms smiles and mothers day today u will recall
This is a valuable write- we forget what we use so much and we must not forget or we shall lose a lovely child. Valuable write. I liked your creative use of The Cute as a way to describe as well as name the child. These children could and should be called The Cute! Excellent word choice.
It is a wonder that more children do not die from household accidents- as best as Mothers and Fathers watch over them, they always find that timy crack in our protectiveness- - I was fortunate that my children survived their behavior- -yet they still roll their eyes when remembering how protective I was [they called it overly-protective! ! ! ]
A poignant write with great message. A very thoughtful poem.
well, normally i would not use cute as a noun as you seem to have done. but poetic license is useful. and it The Cute Was DID help catch my attention. bri :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is very sad poem having a warning to young mass to maintain discipline. Beautiful composition.