..........An Earthy Paradise.... Poem by Little Sunshine

..........An Earthy Paradise....

Rating: 4.8


If I had one wish
It would be me, losing myself in your beautiful eyes
If I had one dream
It would be me falling asleep in your arms
Never want to be awaken till I hear the laughter of you and our daughters playing around
I am waiting for a last longing day
Never be departed again, I will not have to call you to let you know that I am in love with you
But showing you how much I love you and how your love grows each day with you by my side
Come here, take me with you, and let me see the true beauty of life in your eyes
Let me see the true meaning of paradise
Let us see our daughters blooming like daisy and narcissus flowers
This would be an earthy paradise

Dedicated to the love of my life....

May 3,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

what a beautiful and inspiring poem this is..amazing write my friend truly

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 May 2009

May Paradise find you, may your love always be true, may your babies be beautiful just like you, best wishes your friend Andrew 10

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Eyan Desir 04 May 2009

Well this is a good read thanks for the share

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Yasser Koor 07 May 2009

dear the life is a beautiful paradise, when u want it beautiful place, , that what i know, we have to look at this world through a beautiful eyes and a beautiful mind just like yours. nice poem especially 'never want to be awaken till I hear the laughter of you and our daughters playing around' really it is made me hopeful :) cheers up dear

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i envious. i wont lie.. i want a lady to write me this too. beautiful

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 October 2009

You seem to have the true meaning.

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romantic. fantastic. poetic.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 June 2009

Amazing love poem.10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 25 May 2009

Those four opening lines are fantastic...lovely tribute you pay to your Love, Little...loved yor write...10

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Akram Awadat 18 May 2009

great feeling, fantastic poem

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