.i Know I Don'T Deserve It.... Poem by Little Sunshine

.i Know I Don'T Deserve It....

Rating: 4.7


i know i don't deserve it...

I hate myself when someone wanna run away from me
I think I have done something wrong for making them to do so
But every time they do that
I know they will be back

But I wanna know
Are they interested in hurting me?
When they know I will be sad by their doing
Are they really want me to be out of their sight?
If they are, but why they always come back

I don’t deserve this
I know, I don’t deserve it
But I just wanna know why they are always doing it
Oh God, please, help me to understand this

January 7,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Serenity Prayer 07 January 2009

i understand what youre feeling. i wonder that too. but im here for you if you wanna talk bout it =) btw great job.

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Ency Bearis 08 January 2009

a nice inquisitive thoughts..someday someone will tell you..sometimes its your conscience...well penned..10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 January 2009

Well, please Don't hate your self Hataw, people do things for their own reasons, I know what you deserve is lots of happiness... Andy

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Blue Eyes 08 January 2009

very nice poem, well written.i love the way u used ur own experience to teach us not to trust all the people.coz if u trust someone completely and give him all u have then he will dump u.

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Yasser Koor 09 January 2009

oh don't feel like that i'm ur friend and u can find me always around u just tell me if u wanna talk. don't let ur felling let u down. (u have to smile) always try to smile, , , i learned that from a great friend of mine she learns me how to smile, how to make things better, , how to look at the world in beautiful eyes.....

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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

such a poignant poem written vividly and expressive...10

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Bill Thomas 17 January 2009

There are some people who take delight in hurting others - but you have a grace and a spirit that can rise above the pain and soar into the light. Believe it.

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Kite Remedy 15 January 2009

people are closer than we think they are, but the closer they get, the harder is to see them.. nice write..

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 14 January 2009

In this poem the author described leaving people that are insecure but hurt her the same with the way they behave. These lines are fluent, clever and promising.

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Akram Awadat 12 January 2009

very nice words, i like it keep writing

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