A Far Away Star... Poem by Little Sunshine

A Far Away Star...

Rating: 4.9


You are the moon in the sky
and i am a far away star from you
you can give me light and make me bright
but i have nothing to offer you
would that be ok with you?

October 22,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasser Koor 23 October 2008

great poem Hataw, I see hope here and poem has written when the mind is clear. i like it so much dear, well-done

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Hazem Al Jaber 23 October 2008

``in the heart of the sky, i am there, , there to be between the stars and close to you.. to give you the light, and warm poetic feelings..`` well, , , so stunning what your pen penned.. beautiful dear sweet arabian girl.. yours... hazem al..

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 October 2008

Lovely love poem with innocent emotion. 10+

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 28 October 2008

The Italian childhood textbooks often report a short composition that the poet Aldo Palazzeschi wrote about a very little village. He wrote that that village had a very little star whole for it, and concluded: 'I wonder whether even a big town has it.'

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Anjali Sinha 30 October 2008

hey a nice small and cute one far away star are you indeed ++10 anju

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Memo Said 04 January 2011

No words describe you words but i want to say i love your words Nice Nice words

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Rachel Anderson 28 December 2009

this is a great poem to read, its short and nice, loved it thanks =]

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Rachel Anderson 28 December 2009

this is a great poem to read, its short and nice, loved it thanks =]

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 October 2009

This poem is OK for me. You are the star.

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Paige S 02 July 2009

Very tender write! Nice Job! ! ! ! 10+

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