I Give Our Self This Chance... Poem by Little Sunshine

I Give Our Self This Chance...

Rating: 4.6


i give our self this chance...

Tomorrow is mystery
No body knows what is going to happen
But there is that strange thing in my heart
Telling me that you will prove your love for me some how

I don’t know why but I just feel that way

When first my eyes gazed your big brown bright eyes
I feel something in my heart
But I laughed at myself for this is not gonna be love at first sight

But now I see
I see it very clearly what is going on here
I see that day after day, time after time
You wanna share your love with me

I don’t know why but I just feel that way

I will have to think about it tonight
To make sure is the love that you are showing me is true
Is it right for me to allow myself to fall in love with you?
After lot of difficulties i went through with the other one

I give our self this chance
Hoping there will be happiness till the end of time


dedicated to Shayne...

November 24,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasser Koor 02 December 2008

it is good to feel like that way he will tell u that he will prove love 4 u. he will share ut love, , , .. that time between lover it is important...this chance, , , between lovers.., , nice poem it is touching my heart.... good poem and great work it is art

0 0 Reply
<font color=black>Nagourta 02 December 2008

:) good. It appears you have found happiness. Interesting how poets can put emotions felt by so many so perfectly and simply. A good read, this is one of your better poems, and that is saying something...

0 0 Reply
Andrew mark Wilkinson 03 December 2008

well what a lucky guy Hataw, always wonderful falling in love... Andy 10

0 0 Reply
Ency Bearis 03 December 2008

nice poem and message to your soul mate..poignant and written deep in you heart..lovely...A10 Ency Bearis

0 0 Reply
Serenity Prayer 04 December 2008

beautifully written. fanastic job. kinda sad, but good.

0 0 Reply
Manonton Dalan 27 December 2015

yes there is happiness til the end of time

0 0 Reply
Anjali Sinha 14 December 2008

awhhhhh cho cheeeeeeeewt my lil princess so nice to see you in love again-- Shayne you lucky guy haaaaaan keep my princess happy love u dear A+++ anjali

1 0 Reply
<font color =fusha>Amy 13 December 2008

i love this poem really makes you think 10!

1 0 Reply
Mark Nwagwu 12 December 2008

Go ahead, hataw, fall in love; if you fall, you'll get up again, and fall again in love; it is a never-ending battle of rise and fall, the better part is the fall. And your write says it all, so lovingly.

0 0 Reply
Aijaz Asif 08 December 2008

a very beautiful write indeed with lots of yearns....thanks 10 rgds asif

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success