An Approval Poem by Ntsako Manhisa

Ntsako Manhisa

Ntsako Manhisa

Grasmere, Mountain View, Gauteng, South Africa.

An Approval

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I had a plan
Yes, said my old man,
I said Amen.

I had a proposal
But no approval.
My mum sounded skeptical.

I had ideas
My friend had no ears,
I think he said yes.

I had an interest
With a confused heart.
It said, be glad I still pump blood

I had a vision.
I needed permission.
God said that's my mission.

Tuesday, September 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
If you are seeking approval from any other source rather than God
you will get different answer and opinions which ends up confusing
yourself.
But God always knows what's best for you.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nkululeko Mdudu 25 February 2019

wonderful piece, keep writing

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 October 2018

I had a vision. I needed permission. God said that's my mission.... beautiful at the end you came to the point...... God.. just fine, i smiled as i read that......... tony

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Valsa George 06 October 2018

So true! When you are confused, seek the help of God! He will clear of all our confusion! I hail you for your staunch faith!

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Ntsako Manhisa

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Grasmere, Mountain View, Gauteng, South Africa.
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