An Angelic Figure Poem by Ahmad Husain

An Angelic Figure

Rating: 5.0


There came the Santa
Carrying with him
—— At the strides of his beloved reindeers
On his golden sleigh of hope ——
The flowers of love, affection and glee;
Scattering into the busy world of sorrows and tears
In the painful, frosty weather
The new warmth of love and hope.

Distributing the happiness which knows no bound
To the gullible young ones and kind adults
Giving the despaired crowd a hope to live
And a new rise to the world ahead;
In the barren land of roughly lives
A new crop of love and hope.

He came here and is now to go
Departing from the world not like him
Leaving behind a nostalgic crowd
Waiting for him to come again next year
And end a year-long wait;
Riding in his thick crimson
On his golden sleigh
Like an angelic figure on snow.

There goes the Santa
Taking with him
—— At the strides of his beloved reindeers
On his golden sleigh of hope ——
All the sorrows and tears of the world after him
And leaving behind
In place of them
The antidote of all the fears and pains.

Friday, December 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: christmas
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 January 2015

Distributing happiness during Christmas is definitely a great task. Your poem is very beautiful that touches heart again and again. Excellent work shared. Awarding 10 marks out of 10

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Khalida Bano Ali 30 December 2014

Beautiful and amazing....................10

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Muhammad Farhan Ahmed 28 December 2014

I usually do not read rhyme-less poems but the excellently vivid imagery and imaginative ideas really forced me to read it all up. :) Excellent poem. BTW I read your sweet messages. Thank you a lot for them :) You said that you like Urdu Poetry. Then you must be a native of Lucknow, right?

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Akhtar Jawad 27 December 2014

An amazing poem at this early age...............10

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Ahmad Husain

Ahmad Husain

Gaya (Bihar) , India
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