An Alliterative Lament Poem by John Carter Brown

An Alliterative Lament

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One March Monday morning
A dark dismal day,
The snow slowly sleeting,
We wending our way.

Just two tired tradesmen
In life's lonely lanes,
Both thoughtlessly thinking
Of bed in our brains.

Temptation entreating us,
'Wait a wee while...
Why have you to hurry? '
It says with a smile.

But we will not wait
Or sit silently still
'Til the day's deeds are done,
We must make to the mill;

There to firstly fulfil
Our unchanging chores,
And to feel like two felons
Behind dungeon-like doors.

We will work at our weaving
For pennies, not pounds;
A lugubrious life,
Then a grave in the ground.

Written March 1995

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just an exercise in alliteration really. A bit dark I know, but sometimes that's how things go.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Forrester 08 January 2013

Enjoyed reading your poem John.

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Smoky Hoss 07 October 2012

I must say I really enjoyed reading this one!

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Stevie Taite 06 September 2012

Like this lamenting Sadness it spells Clever construction of Toils that it tells: -)

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