‘amnesia’ [3]. Poem by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

‘amnesia’ [3].

Rating: 5.0


‘AMNESIA’ [3].
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# Memory:
Volleys of ‘fire-ball-services’,
Poor return,
Brave walkover,
Memory is dominant
in melancholic scenario. #

# Amnesia:
Dark tunnel,
labyrinth,
zed black darkness,
‘Photon - particled - services’,
Sucked - up / blotted out,
Zero return,
Cowardice walkover,
Amnesia dominates
in void scenario. #

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rafique Farooqi 14 June 2009

dear dr. Sakti you gave beautiful presentation of amnesia....... i like it you are requested to read....walking with wild amnesia ...posted by me.I hooe will like that.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 June 2009

Amnesia of life and death and previous births.

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Joseph Poewhit 27 July 2009

'Dark tunnel ' says much

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Surya . 28 July 2009

looks likw a reaction of chemistry, and spped in physics voted10 surya

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Rafique Farooqi 03 August 2009

brave walkover and other terms make me understanding of amnesia well written you may read walking.with my walking.wild amnesia

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 October 2009

This one word 'Amnesia', how it is taking one through dark tunnels and bylanes. Wonderful.

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Katang Chakravorty 14 October 2009

Psychiatry physics and sports all blended in a very ‘pleasant-read’ way. Poets I find near to Providence [emotionally]. Ten++ WR

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Tai Chi Italy 23 September 2009

Pharmaceutical drugs that completely wipe out our ability to feel or think anything, have no long term benefits, other than to permanently dull the mind to lifes beautiful colours. I am sure in short doses, for trauma, emotional and otherwise, certain drugs have a place, but that is all. Natural forms of medication, is my preferred prescription. Killing off the human in the person, is no solution, imo...it needs light relief. Smiling at you Tai

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Aparna Sinha 16 September 2009

I am repeating myself Great poem! great series of poem..

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Waqas Naeem 09 September 2009

very interesting contrast indeed, and I'm made to wonder is there no melancholy in the void? great poem! cheers...

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