Am I Mistake Poem by Deki aka Mark Fisher

Am I Mistake

Rating: 5.0


Am I a mistake?
People look at me with hatred
And disappointment
They say I should be a shame
But I’m not
They say I should die
But I won’t
Am I a mistake?
That will make bigger mistakes
Or will I do one huge mistake
That comes by accident
Or am I a sin
Am I a mistake?
That wasn’t planed
That has do everything wrong
Am I really a mistake that
Should have been born

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 22 November 2009

valid existential question, i feel you you know you are not a mistake. Mamta

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g black black 21 November 2009

whoo another great poem of you its a bit sad and i loved it grrrrrreeeeaaaat job on this one and btw you are not a mistake

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Winnie Angel 20 November 2009

Well my friend ya not a 'mistake' coz ppl say and can't make ya a mistake. percieve the world as ya feel more imporantly ya perception of ya-self, so never let anyone to think that ya a mistake! ...Winnie with love

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C. P. Sharma 19 October 2009

A little bit of editing can make it a wonderful lyric. CP

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