The Real Me Poem by Deki aka Mark Fisher

The Real Me

Rating: 5.0


Why can’t I see what in the hell
Is going on
I feel liquid around my feet but I feel I'm on all fours
No not again why dose this keep happen to me
I'm tried of waken up feeling liquid around me and feeling like
I'm on all four
But this time was different I can open my eyes
I open them I black then I see a little light then the
Light just explodes into a big flash then I look around light is everywhere
Then I look down I see red in my head I think blood
I bent down to smell it and I was right it was blood I tried to run away but it followed me
But to make things worser I'm in a tunnel an there is no way out
I keep running so I start to run a spiral there is no end to this madness
I yell HELP
I hear my own echo then I hear I'm here to help you I run to the voice
And soon as I make the turn
I see a room with a cage the blood stop following me and I see
Big red eyes and big grin with Sylvia running
Down its mouth I ask what are you he said I'm the real you no
It can’t be yes, No
The only thing I can say is SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME NOW!


BY DEKI

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christina Phan 21 November 2009

well done keep it up the gd work 10+

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Kjxnhvkzdh Vnhcjfh 28 September 2009

very very well written

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 24 September 2009

you will be in an endless struggle with yourself... yourself remains follow you till the end... yourself is the matter which distincts you from the others. your mind-your consciousness construct you but not your true self. deep writing/ your way is philosophical... 10 for your TRUE SELF

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