Am I Irresponsible Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

Am I Irresponsible

Rating: 5.0


[read 'a vote for 49 O' before this]

A vote for 49 [o]
was it irresponsible?
it was'nt even a suggestion
i was just telling you the provision...and
it was'nt out of irresponsibility
it was out of helplessness

DEMOCRACY IS OUR ONLY SAVIOUR
AND FOR DEMOCRACY TO BE SAFER
THIS IS OUR ONLY MEASURE

Donot waste your vote
vote for the best and be safer
a thief and a killer come to pole
am i to consider the thief the safer

WHO SAID I WASTED MY VOTE
DEMOCRCY SHOWS UP ONLY DURING VOTE
AFTER I VOTE...
I LOOSE MY SAY IN THE WHOLE

I DONOT WANT TO CHOOSE BETWEEN A THIEF AND A KILLER
I KNOW INDIANS ARE A LOT BETTER

what i really want is
i want a leader
who does'nt care for power
i want a leader
who is just not a seller

IF A INVESTOR FOR VOTES...LOST
SINCE I DID NOT VOTE
I WILL FEEL HAPPY

NOT VOTING FOR A PERSON
MAKING MY VOTE
A VALID INVALID VOTE
IS THE SMALL PUISHMENT
I COULD GIVE
TO THESE INVALID PEOPLE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 01 April 2009

Are you a samanyan Mr.lakshminarayanan? ....wonderfully representing a whole lot...congratulations

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Vaibhav Pandey 01 April 2009

very good write sam........very much needed.......10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 April 2009

A mind opener read...............good write.....10+++......

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Maitreyee Joshi 01 April 2009

no.you are not irrisponsible.but we all have to find out a way through this to make our country a better place to live.thanks for sharing

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Miriam Maia Padua 01 April 2009

what i really want is i want a leader who does'nt care for power i want a leader who is just not a seller ....great words Sam...we all want our leaders to be a service of men... this is such a clever write, Sam....i like your thoughts...you expressed your beautiful hopes for your country through your poems...and that's really great.. You are not irresponsible, Sam....You just do what your conscience told you... 10+++++

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Anjali Sinha 11 April 2009

wowwwwwww a beautiful write A+++ and 10++ anjali

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Bob Blackwell 09 April 2009

One man one vote....every five years...democracy?

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Sandra Martyres 05 April 2009

Great poem Samanyan... I share your views completely....10

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Ravi A 03 April 2009

If everybody had the same feeling as you, the world would have better long ago. There is every reason for us to stay away from voting. Let us forget the poor class. Even the educated lot is intellectually fighiting in the name of parties- we can hear the debate in our office dining rooms. This is the tragic situation. Let us pray for the transformation of mind of our leaders. Collective prayers have enough force but who exercises this? We have to reflect on the subject.

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rago rago 03 April 2009

very interesting poem. I agree with yur poetic expressions.

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