Clutching your name
Near to my heart
It’s so hard to forget
The way your eyes
See right through me
Reaching out my hand
Empty abyss greets it
How far did you go?
Once you were here
And now my dear
I search your eyes frantically
At a loss, no clue what to do
I can’t accept
What I know to be true
My hand closes around nothing
And I realize
I can’t let you go
But you’re already gone
I search your eyes frantically At a loss, no clue what to do I love those lines. good poem. *Purkey Girl*
Really good poem It touched me very good keep on writting. :)
I agree with Raj.Beautiful.The shock of a mirror becoming a black hole.Kev x
A lovely poem, Jennifer - it captures so genuinely the pain of love...the line: How far did you go? is dramtic and powerful....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Its a very very good poem you can feel the emotion. My favorite part was: 'Empty abyss greets it' Keep writing Yo!