Mark R Slaughter


'Alone! ' I cried


'Alone! ' I cried again.
'Alone I am with me!
Lonely in a world of mist
Alone, I reach to touch your wrist
And see if I am thee.’

To be alone beside a soul
Afloat, adrift; an empty ghoul
Alone in woe; the yearning flesh
To fill a thin, contorted mesh
Diffuse atop an icy floor, alone.

So much alone in fact, I lack
The tonal vibrancy of life:

I am a song without a tune
alone;
A greying sky in June
alone;

The blueness of a sullen moon
– waning in a starless night–
alone;

Coasting down a weedy pass
alone;
The only image in the glass
alone;

To meet a certain heavy fate
– to turn and shut the knurly gate–

…alone.



Copyright © Mark R Slaughter 2009










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alone alone alone alone
alone alone alone alone
alone alone alone alone
alone alone alone alone

alone alone alone alone

Submitted: Thursday, October 22, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, May 04, 2011

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,231 Points Amitava Sur (9/7/2014 8:48:00 PM)

    A lovely description of an intense feeling of loneliness .. a heart touching poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,231 Points Amitava Sur (9/7/2014 8:47:00 PM)

    A lovely description of an intense feeling of loneliness .. a heart touching poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 272 Points Aijaz Asif (7/28/2013 3:56:00 PM)

    wow.... a superb write so much soul melting... it was like I was reading my own thoughts...thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 272 Points Samreen Malik (7/11/2013 2:01:00 AM)

    I am a song without a tune
    alone;
    is a shriek of the soul. It just touched my heart. Really, nothing is more agonizing than being alone as Mother Teresa says:
    Loneliness and the feeling of being unwanted is the most terrible poverty.
    This is why the thing many people are most worried about is just being alone.
    Heart touching poem!


    Samreen M
    Bolee.com (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 272 Points William Kd (3/10/2013 4:28:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading this poem of solitude and isolation. So sad to see so many people writing about this very subject. But if emotion is the goal to portray, then I'm sure many people can feel your message in this finely crafted poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 272 Points J L (11/1/2012 5:41:00 PM)

    how do i find my poems i write in here. I wrote 2 cant see them in the forum sect. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Jordan Bales (8/18/2012 10:38:00 PM)

    i liked it the poem made me feel like life is about how you handle being alone its not about when you have the support of others (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Wassila Nader (10/22/2009 2:12:00 PM)

    a very nice touching poem :)
    read my poem a lonely star and a lonely star 2 they are the same idea :)
    thank you very much. (Report) Reply

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