Death, inevitable Death.
So now You come to show Your world,
Hence the blackened cloak – unfurled.
And peering down upon my form
– Bereft of pity – Your eyes of storm.
Death, inexorable Death.
‘When? ’ The only question out of Thee.
My dream retorts 'But ne’er for me! ’
'Twas night of night
The world to day needs well established writers as you are, would you mind if I invite you to my poems? I have Rythm of the day as my new poem. Your comments are highly respected and welcomed
with regards
Your writing is sensational. You have an amazing sense of detail in the most complex way. It's beyond excellence :)
You have an unconventional style in conveying thoughts which is very effective.
it's death again is a good poem
Gaias plan..brilliant.shows many of us feel for mother naturecheck my
'chainsaw masaqure again'.B R S.
I just love your writing, beautifully written and inspiring! The depth I read in these poems makes me want to pick up a pen and fly away. Please put your poetry in a book, I swear I would buy it.
Keep it up sir, you are incredible!
Poetry_an off-shoot of your leisures or hobby has proffered undreamed-of and aloft the preordained men of pen.
Bravo!
You are an advantage to the literati.
Keep the flap flying and more grease to your elbows.