Alone Poem by Anzelyne shideshe
Alone
Home alone,
Silent walls,
Crept breathe,
Thirsty,
Drunken,
Dehydrated,
A quiver of hallucinations,
Smoky kitchen,
Ghost busted?
Seduced to a dance,
A romantic ghost tune,
After a sizzling ghost dinner,
Insanity?
Loneliness.
Hi dear, in a whole poem is all boldly tell about how it felt when being alone and attacked by loneliness feeling..it just accurate....I have nothing to against you dear Anzelyne, but like me maybe you also rushing to write without checking...dehydration and hallucination...whatever it is, its a nice work!
Sometimes I've to jackle between English and German for a year now I've been speaking Germany mostly Infact, here at PH I'm in touch with the language.
An excellent depiction of a depraved state of mind. Wonderful poem! Many greetings, Paul
Nicely done. The imagery is vivid and match the title. Lol thanks for shari.g such lovely poem
Lovely portrayal of loneliness. You're a beautiful lady Anzelyne, lovely picture of you. Thanks for sharing.
Even the picture agrees with the poem, i observed it. Thank you for sharing.
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silent walls, alone, drunk and at the same time dehydrated seduced to a dance insanity? These are all my experience too it is normal when u are away from home living in a foreign nation.. courage! ! ! boldness! ! ! face lif as it aers. remember you havelt to achieve. God bless you. tony
H! i Tony, sometimes you feel like you in your own world, but then life has to go on, alone or not.Thanks for your comment I'm overwhelmed.