Alone Poem by ruby heart

Alone

Rating: 5.0


with nobody to care
with no love
emptyness is crawling
upon me

a shadow taunting me
everywhere i turn.
i feel alone
in the big wide world! ! !

nothing to worry
nothing to get excited
nothing to hope for
i am wasted

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 11 May 2009

The whole world to care But you are not aware CP

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Filled with emptiness and loaded with lonliness. Showing the suffering of a sad soul that is alone. Well done.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 February 2009

a shadow taunting me everywhere i turn. i feel alone in the big wide world! , , ........ loneliness siluhouettes by solitude love seems locked up in room of blue, , , as sky is alone by reeks of deep darkness gusty wind yet taunts by sadness..................excellent exposition of heart when emptied of love, sadness flows crippling passion, wrugt ingenious by sadness, well penned,10+++++, thanks for sharing

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 January 2009

The presentation here is excellant for this poem. There is very little to say in words so it doesn't take many. The three verses are used well. GW62

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