Alone Poem by Sam S.Slait

Alone

Rating: 4.5


As dark breaks the dawn,
The knife breaks my skin,
I feel alone,
In this cold world.

Such pain I feel,
Suffering from a broken heart,
It is so painful,
I can't stop crying.

Why must I endure this,
My eyes burn from crying,
My wrists bleed from cutting,
As the blood trickles from my fingers,

All alone,
in this cruel world,
Why is it me getting hurt,
What did I do to deserve this.

No one to hold me,
No one to love me,
Will I find my soulmate,
Maybe just someone who cares.

My knuckles bruised,
My wrists bloody,
Ready to end this,
With one quick sweep of my blade,
The knife pierces the skin,
There I lay, a corpe on the floor,
With a cut jugular,
Ear to ear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shihabudheen K J 15 November 2012

Deep from your heart.well

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Alex Lees 02 February 2012

I know how you feel!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 15 June 2011

THE POEM HAS CLEAR IMAGERY BUT THE IDEA OF HURTING ONESELF BECAUSE OF A BROKEN HEART IS NEVER A GOOD ONE WRITE POEM INSTEAD THAN BE SAD WHEN YOU ARE ALONE

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Natasha Kirke 06 February 2011

Gosh! This one is really, really heart breaking! Though pretty well written. I think you need someone to talk to, not necessarily a psycologist but someone who can understand what you're going through. I really hope these feelings go away.

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Oh! ! ! This is an emo one

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