Alone Poem by Shaye Michaelson

Alone

Rating: 4.3


I dreamt of you
And held your hand
I found in you
A place to stand
To be within
A happy being
At last my eyes
Open, seeing...

Now I'm alone
I crave your touch
Cold to the bone
Tears fall too much
Angry and scared
Too tired to cry
A love that dared
Now wonders why...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ana Monnar 18 August 2007

Your feelings poured out with great words.

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R H 13 August 2007

Such depth of emotion in this moving portrayal of love, loss and longing. jz

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Not a member No 4 08 August 2007

Brief, stripped to its essence and yet tells the tale of the human condition with great depth. Sad and lovely. jim

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Jonathan Robin 07 August 2007

S ome dreams come true H and holding hand A s one may two Y earn, understand E xistence win, M uch shared joy being I nsight whose spin C an open, seeing... H eart, once alone A nd craving touch, E ntrancing tone L eaves tears as much S car[e]s are repaired. O ld tears may dry N ew love that dared SHA ll YEt reach sky...

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