All The Stars In The Sky Poem by Jason Daniels

All The Stars In The Sky

Rating: 5.0


The stars that I see
Mean nothing to me
For when I see you
They fall out of view.
Their envious light
Loses all of its might
As they try to outshine
What forever is mine.
Defeated, they fly
For all the stars in the sky
Could never compare to you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jean Dament 27 January 2010

A sweet love poem that has a great natural flow to it & expresses well the strong love & devotion for someone. I game it a 10, but it didn't take. Spiritsong

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Jesse Palma 27 January 2010

another good write, i really like your work

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