Air Poem by Lavanya Pati

Air

Rating: 5.0


Our odourless and invisible friend,
We can play with you even inside a tent,
Y're odourless, you are invisible,
we can't see you but you are sensible,
Y're a piece of peace,
We call you wind or breeze,
Y're a life sustaining friend,
So our friendship will never end.

Monday, September 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On a lazy day while relaxing with some chocolates..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 05 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Lavanya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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