Mary Elizabeth Coleridge

(23 September 1861 – 25 August 1907)

Affection - Poem by Mary Elizabeth Coleridge

The earth that made the rose,
She also is thy mother, and not I.
The flame wherewith thy maiden spirit glows
Was lighted at no hearth that I sit by.
I am as far below as heaven above thee.
Were I thine angel, more I could not love thee.

Bid me defend thee!
Thy danger over-human strength shall lend me,
A hand of iron and a heart of steel,
To strike, to wound, to slay, and not to feel.
But if you chide me,
I am a weak, defenceless child beside thee.

Comments about Affection by Mary Elizabeth Coleridge

  • Gold Star - 17,395 Points Terry Craddock (5/6/2015 11:49:00 PM)

    Such a fierce adorable declaration of 'affection' nay love in the second stanza, following the vast distance which separates her apparent social level from his and the declaration she could not love him more if she were an angel. Such strength declared in defence of his person, such fear of being spoken to and treated like a child in his eyes. Gifted power of expression 10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 30,077 Points * Sunprincess * (3/29/2014 10:08:00 PM)

    .........a beautiful write...enjoyed... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,274 Points Ramesh Rai (3/29/2014 9:36:00 PM)

    But if you chide me,
    I am a weak, defenceless child (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sixtus Osim (3/29/2014 3:27:00 PM)

    Whao! Was she beautiful or not? Such strong comparisons between her and the beauty of earth.
    Just as she is so impressed by the beauty of the earth so it is that most people had wonder. Quite a scenic piece of poesy. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,162 Points Savita Tyagi (3/29/2014 1:37:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem. I think I went to somewhat similar emotions writing a poem called ' My family'. Written little differently. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,584 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (3/29/2014 12:57:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem with love, affection like good feeling. The world is so beautiful and it is the perfect creator of good flowers, greenish enviornment, trees and bushes, the rivers, oceans, mighty mountains and also the human being. The poem is very enjoyable for reading and repeating. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,069 Points Hans Vr (3/29/2013 7:21:00 AM)

    Great affection and humility (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anthony Foster (3/29/2012 1:29:00 PM)

    Loves balance she has said it all,
    and back again a circle of eternity,
    About the strengths and weakness of overwhelming love for someone. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carlos Echeverria (3/29/2012 10:56:00 AM)

    Fabulous rhythm...such a pleasure to read with power-packed, honest feeling. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Christopher Cruz (3/29/2012 7:42:00 AM)

    great poem i was touched when reading it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Straw (3/29/2010 8:07:00 AM)

    The psychological insight that affection can turn to “a hand of iron” - that love can become tyrannous is true. I could do without the metaphysics of the first verse, and have the second verse start “Affection, bid me defend thee! ” Sometimes, a poem has a kind of 'sighting' at the beginning before it truly begins. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Adnan Khalifeh (3/29/2010 7:39:00 AM)

    Nice poem.
    Dear friends,
    I have read your comments regarding this poem.
    I like to read your comments on my poem too (I give-up) .
    Best Regards,
    Adnan. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (3/29/2010 4:58:00 AM)

    Really captures the heights and depths of the spirit. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Qhalis Kaiyisha (3/29/2010 2:57:00 AM)

    What a beautiful poem about strength and weakness (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,100 Points Ramesh T A (3/29/2010 2:10:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem telling about the strength and weakness of a loving soul is interesting to read! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Susan Witman (3/29/2009 9:59:00 PM)

    It's beautiful.... You write well. For the rose could be a person or a plant depending on your interpretation. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bria F (3/29/2009 9:49:00 PM)

    That was a great poem. this poem is like me and how i feel. makes me want to cry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Blue angel Florida (3/29/2008 8:18:00 PM)

    Bravo! Romantic, Poetic, genuine! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jenn Romero (3/29/2007 6:07:00 PM)

    It's beautiful, Mary had a way with words
    xoxo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alex Murphy (3/29/2007 5:11:00 PM)

    Very Nice. love the imagery! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 31, 2002

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