Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 159 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Adventures Of Two Captains To The Heart Of Galaxy Part Two


The galaxy is my playground
Stealing the gravitronic pull of stars
Sails centrifugally whipped round
Harpooning the angry face of Mars.

Captured moons power my plutonic ship
Rowing meteoric oars in the galley's bay
Light years flip, time trails slip
White suns burst black holes thirst
In the Milky Way
Where I encounter young Captain A.

A man of legend and song
Of noble Persian birth
Defending the earth
His crew attacked
With nebular drenched gas
His crew dying loud and long!

Oh! But his ship of a maverick
And marvelous formation,
Masts of silver toned ionic steel
Garish wind strung gyrating sails
Decks of amber sun soaked gold
And his crew hearty and bold.

Written by 'Captain Cur'
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Submitted: Wednesday, March 20, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, March 20, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

First of all i should offer my especial thanks to the hero of galaxy, Captain Cur. very nice and brilliant lines are written by him.
this poem is the second part of the adventures of two captains. first part is on Captain cur page. the next one will be on his page too.
Enjoy reading our adventures!
Captain Cur& A.
E

Comments about this poem (Adventures Of Two Captains To The Heart Of Galaxy Part Two by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A) )

  • Veteran Poet - 1,060 Points Unwritten Soul (4/2/2013 6:12:00 AM)

    I always love to see these two captains and their adventure, one captain in the air one conquer the oceans....and i the soul who can get link in these two terrestrial of their state and mind LOL...nice work, congrats both of you! ! i enjoyed it CaptainS_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 318 Points Poetheart Morgan (4/1/2013 4:33:00 PM)

    Fascinating writer Poet! What a beautiful adventure! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 115 Points Terry O'leary (3/27/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Splendid imagery, Ellias! Keep up the good work... Terry (Report) Reply

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