Admit & Brace Poem by Ryan Alchakaki

Admit & Brace

Rating: 5.0


Why not admit the weakness you possess,
Then strive, then climb the high circular road
That leads into the truth and dream of strength.
Be sure that weakness is always revealed
To you sight and different goals thereat.
That my-self weakened as I was stubborn.
When I tried to hide, the world brought me out
Then showed the details of my inner soul.
Inside myself I struggled to vanish,
No way, Life gave me away, down to trash.
I felt as the ride was rough and windy
To others looked very well from outside,
But the inside, screaming, tried to seek help
Form no one, and no one heard the call.
Answer me right now, why not pick the mind,
The rules and the lines of the plot ahead.
Grow wise, again the power, the weak should know !
Ride the high road and train the self again
To learn to race up the path of real cause.
Goals hide inside the soul of the body.
If you lock the strength in, it goes away.
Admit weakness and make your-self sure know
How to fight and how to beat frustration,
But when life is short and brains are jammed,
And you, thereto, avoid the cause of God,
We all not know the power of the soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2021

the soul into admiration of humanity and the creation of all mighty, ALLAH. Touch me with your taste of feelings and I shall be overwhelmed with the springs of pleasure and happiness.' I love to read your present poems, Sir!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2021

Your powerful lines: Ryan says: 'The sense of belonging to the world is above all claims. No speck shall touch the heart of feelings with grains of beauty spread on the pillows we sleep on, mixed with dreams of elevating

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2021

Now about this poem you wrote in 2014, such an excellent poem that speaks to my heart.5 Stars full on Top for you, dear Poet! I cite here your powerful lines:

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2021

First, CONGRATULATIONS being chosen by PoemHUnter and Team as The Poet Of The Day. Hoorray! I am very happy for you, dear Poet!

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Ryan Alchakaki

Ryan Alchakaki

Hama / Syria
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