Friday, July 3, 2009

Acceptance Comments

Rating: 5.0

like a moon, it shines
like a star, it twinkles
like a sun, it dries
tears from her eyes...
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lady grace
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Rafique Farooqi 30 October 2009

lt is accepted emotion always................and wonderful

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i love love and i accept love.. love is good.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2009

love should be watered it should be cared it should be wrapped and should be spoken........accept it with grace and downot allow it wated down.. gentle touch with emotional careandshe is certainly yours... so lovable poem with heart felt feelings.. i loved it....10 read mine mary to marry.....mis i miss u....a place called home

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Miriam Maia Padua 17 July 2009

sweet....like a soft -flowing brook..flowing with tranquility flowing with passion and desire... brings lightness to one's heart... really fine to read...acceptance without conditions 10++ lovelots, maia

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Djinnga Fairbairn 16 July 2009

it is refreshing to read these lines... the outline of feelings is well defined...the overall context has a lightness to it...pleasant read...thank you....

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Noel Horlanda 12 July 2009

Hey, you hit the nail right on the head. This is another classical writes for love's definition. Thanks

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C. P. Sharma 12 July 2009

Complete cycle of tears of joy and a perfect love story. A wonderful piece of poetry. Grace, thanks a lot for sharing it. CP

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Ted M 04 July 2009

Nice advice in the form of a poem. Graceful.

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 04 July 2009

True feelings of love mam.Amazing

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~ Jon London ~ 03 July 2009

The beauty starts with a smile, that reflects the joys of heart...it's warmth spreads love to be accepted....life continues to flow under the wings of love....beautiful work

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Surya . 03 July 2009

rightly said. love should be accepted for its further flow voted10 surya

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 July 2009

I accept what all you say to get that 'Love'.

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Merna Ibrahim 03 July 2009

A wonderful poem and a wonderful title too.......keep it up. Merna

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Tobias Gray 03 July 2009

so beautiful! the words just floated! Great write!

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Aziz Alkaabi 03 July 2009

Good flow and fine words.

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Angelic Warrior 03 July 2009

very nice write :) .....10

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Marieta Maglas 03 July 2009

i love this triple simile: '' like a moon, it shines like a star, it twinkles like a sun, it dries tears from her eyes'' apparently, in the absence of love we find our resignation '' in tears'', but in reality it is a way to fight...excellent poem...10+++ from me.

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Carol Gall 03 July 2009

nice lady good observation

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