Absorption And Submission Poem by Claude H Oliver II

Absorption And Submission

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How do I explain
Being drawn into
Being caught up in
Being sucked into
Willingly

How do I look forward
To the time of
Immersion

The cradle of those arms
Like the haven of the womb
The banishment of fear
The warmth of heavenly pleasure
Divine surrender

Claude H. Oliver II 1/24/2006

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 26 October 2009

'Being drawn in and caught up' very appropriately chosen words describing 'Absorption and Submission' a 10 my dear

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bob dunne 13 April 2009

I found it to be very vivid and original congrats

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