Treasure Island

Unwritten Soul


Above From The Deep


Above from the deep
Taller than the sky wall
We shall pluck the sun
Embracing all shines in our arm
Bring it back into the ground
Brightening dark deep down
A Light for our dreams to grow
Above from the deep

Let the shine in their eyes staring
Upon me holding something
In my hand without a thing
Because only my eyes knowing
The existence of what i am holding
The invisible dream that i dream

Own my heart as whole
Forever it will be placed in my hand
Coated with my every strength
With all trust i lay in this palm
For invisible dream to survive

Just like a farmer without a land
Only in my heart for seeds to grow
Waiting for wake up from long sleep
In a while we witnessing the flowing wind
Moving with the time, roll the clock wheels
Then we watching days changing to years
Observing the hopeless grass grow taller

The shine in their eyes intriguing
Of my invisible seed surfaced by the dust
Layers of ashes bury it deeper from above
In my hand, i still holding, i still believing
The strength and trust i keep holding
For a small wish one day will growing

Above from the deep
Fertilizing with trial and error
Usual watering without surrender
Above from the deep
Raising hand from below
The green hopes finally crawling out
In ambient of different calling to wake up
Above from the deep
The sun still waiting for this new born
Touch them up to reach higher as they can go
Higher and taller above
Above from this deep

I just like a farmer without a land
But seeding dreams without discriminating
Of which seeds I should choose and growing
To pick only the best one to grow, No oh No
As my heart says grow all, their potential we don't hold
So i will grow all without discriminating
Even I am only a farmer without a land

One sweet day i smell something sweet
From a garden of my soul
The growing plant i seed once
with tears and hardness i witnessed
Harvest from sweet sacrifice
Turn for joy and happiness
For reality now in same line
Side by side walk with me

Above from this deep
Sweat and tears dropp to my feet
I smell the existence of my ripen dream fruit
Yet if i grow all dreams i shall have many
Of diverse tastes and colorful flowers
So i told the seed and land, my heart of no land farmer
Believe your self to go above, get brighter
Even you cant, don't go deeper, it's darker

So take care of what you dream
Just matter of time to tell you when
For one day it will go above
Higher, reaching from this deep
Above from this deep

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : About this poem: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
This is a poem that i write for one of my friend here, that finally
found the strength after many times feel down for uncertainty time
I'm so proud to see how great smile can bounce back to that innocent heart.I know we dream many things in our life, sometimes we can reach sometimes we cant but never abandon what we have start, seed them with try...maybe for others our dream is a small but in our eyes that is what we wanted for, so chase what you want to do...we may not have it now, seed takes years to grow as a strong tree, some even to sprout takes years to get favorable condition....I never agree
for whom said, pick the best seed or seedling...sometimes the weaker one could be stronger and better, it changes through time, like our life we become better..we learn to survive, so give any chance to anyone and dream to grow and proves as what they really are...and for a dream we dream we will enjoy a fruit imagine if we dream of different, we may have many types of fruits/flower just if we seed and care them....but dream without try and care it is hopeless...
It's a dream in a dream...For my friend who knows that this is for you, you have fallen many times, cry deeply and now i am glad you find a shineSo go my dear friend, for everyone Go above from the deep...you will smile, For all..LOve_Unwritten Soul

Submitted: Tuesday, March 20, 2012
Edited: Friday, June 08, 2012

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  • Patricia Grantham (8/12/2013 8:14:00 AM)

    Arise from the deep where there is nothing but darkness. No light can
    penetrate its gloom. Rise to the top and sow the seeds that will draw
    from the light its life giving power. Just like a dream thats been planted
    in the mind will take sometime to grow and be fruitful when it takes root.
    So poignantly written. Reaches to the depth of the Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (8/25/2012 8:48:00 AM)

    I loved this. Your writing is so calming. Thank you for sharing this. (Report) Reply

  • Thoughts Of A Poet (8/6/2012 7:25:00 PM)

    Above from the deep
    Fertilizing with trial and error
    Usual watering without surrender
    Above from the deep
    Raising hand from below
    The green hopes finally crawling out
    In ambient of different calling to wake up
    Above from the deep
    The sun still waiting for this new born
    Touch them up to reach higher as they can go
    Higher and taller above
    Above from this deep

    that line is so sad (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson (7/15/2012 3:20:00 AM)

    holy God! who do you write it for? i love the paradox.. i love the smile in your poem... i can feel the happiness...
    such a lovely poem full of nice aspects....
    fantastic my friend (Report) Reply

  • Deep Mukherjee (6/2/2012 10:59:00 AM)

    This poem is really a gem.....every piece of ideas expressed, and metaphors used is precise yet powerful.......... (Report) Reply

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (5/17/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    Ohooo Great poem...nice metaphor...specially this ~ '...We shall pluck the sun/Embracing all shines in our arm...' a feeling what poet like you can do...enjoyed much tenner ~ Regards ~ niv

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    Invite to read and comment on my poem [read as a protest] ‘Ogling Orgy’ or any … Thanks …..Sorry for belated comment (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (5/16/2012 1:33:00 PM)

    Powerful, uplifting and enlightening poem. We all need to rise above the deep.
    In the event my ship is ever sunk, I hope I have this poem with me.
    Great piece of writing. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (4/12/2012 10:24:00 PM)

    Dear Soul,

    This poem is really touching, moving, and affecting the deepest our soul. The images of a farmer without land letting anyhow all seeds grow and enjoying sometimes the fruits of weakest of seeds is so fantastic. Very, very nice. The image of holding ths invisible dream in your hand, so wonderful. Keep it in your hands, keep it in your soul and keep writing many many more poems. (Report) Reply

  • Shadow Girl (3/30/2012 9:22:00 PM)

    This is beautiful my lil soul..brought a tear to me eye...fantastic flow and movement of emotions
    big sis
    xo (Report) Reply

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