A Taste, A Thought From Me...To You Poem by Unwritten Soul

A Taste, A Thought From Me...To You

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A bite of apple and it sweetness you have tasted
it just more than a blessing than you thought

The reality is, it is a combination of continuous blessings
The blessing that you've never seen

From an apple, a fruit...it came from a survival flowers
that hold by a strong branch

And this strength came from accumulation power produced by leaves
They all hanging and stand strong by a healthy trunk and its supported roots.

And of course the roots are hold tighter by supportive beads of soil
Not forgetable the acknowlegement to the air that supply carbon dioxide, water and even to sunlight..Each of them, is a blessing
just to give you a bite of apple..

So i guess it is our time to start to be more thankful
Because even though what we have maybe a little, the blessing behind of it, we never know...and it beyond the word of blessing itself

Comparison of what you've got wont make you better or wiser
Past years we gained billions of blessings
and future years i wish all of us have greater n the best
but you can share these with people that needs,
we provide LOVE and blessing from heart to heart

Happy New Year Everybody, with love and respect_Unwritten Soul

Thursday, January 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is not a poem or artistic writing
it just a letter to my dear friends and who willing to read my work
if i were a poet, i will plant flowers in garden paper
but i am only a free soul, to share my thought
so for this new year, jan 1st 2015 i want we start new year
with a thought as person, to be thankful so we can see more brighter side in our life

happy new year everyone_Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 03 January 2015

Much wisdom here Soul, very well said. With very best wishes for the New Year to you also.

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Lyn Paul 13 January 2015

Truly incredible words Soul. Covering simple but such important pieces of life that we should all stop, appreciate and be thankful for. A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!

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Neela Nath Das 14 January 2015

Happy New Year _soul.A beautiful way of greeting.You are always great!

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Neela Nath Das 14 January 2015

Happy New Year _soul.A beautiful way of greeting.You are always great!

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Mj Lemon 03 February 2018

Wonderful work, Soul. This reminds me of 'the tip of the iceberg'. It represents only a small portion of the wonder we see and experience. Too often we suppose that small, albeit important, part is the whole. How much we miss when we leap to such conclusions! A terrific poem, Soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2017

True message wisely portrayed with a pleasant beginning such as.... A bite of apple and it sweetness you have tasted it just more than a blessing than you thought The reality is, it is a combination of continuous blessings The blessing that you've never seen From an apple, a fruit...it came from a survival flowers that hold by a strong branch And this strength came from accumulation power produced by leaves They all hanging and stand strong by a healthy trunk and its supported roots. Though it is a poem for greeting new year 2015 yet it bears a philosophical ground on life and journey. Beautiful poem.

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Unwritten Soul 14 September 2017

Thank you Sir Kumarmani Mahakul for always support my writing, maybe my works are weak but you always find its stength thanks :)

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Rebecca Navarre 19 January 2017

Oh How Beautifully True! ! ! ! ! How Fantastic! ! ! ! ! This Just Pours Out With Strength Beauty And Love! ! ! ! ! With Such Inspiring Thoughts Shared! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much! ! ! ! ! For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Many, Many10S+++++++++++++! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Muhammad Ali 12 August 2016

hello free soul this philosophical piece of art is not boring. it is very wise from you to think (to think is also a blessing) in the time which is supposed to just color the hours in various types of similar ways :) I like these thoughtful lines, plus, a free soul... I am thinking is a blessing in how many ways

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

LOVE and blessing from the heart! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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