Shania K. Younce

Rookie - 421 Points (4-18-1996 / I can´t remember.)

'Abandonne' - Poem by Shania K. Younce

Cacter always told every-one his name.
For he was burly and chestnut brown.
He was a tall horse.
But, every-one did forget his name.
From then he called himself Abandonne.
Then he met a beautilful stallion.
She was pure white with red hooves and a black heart on her forhead.
Her name was Pawn.
Pawn asked, 'What is your name? '
'My name? , 'said Cacter.
'Well, yes.', said Pawn.
'My real name is cacter, but you should just call me Abandonne., 'said Cacter.
'Oh, no don't call yourself that., 'said Pawn.
'Cacter is a very nice name, 'said Pawn.
'You really think, so? , 'asked Cacter.
'I really do, 'replied Pawn.
No one ever for got Cacter's name again.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

The word abandonne is french. The title translation of Abandonne is: profligate, unfornate, abandoned character, deserted, abandoned, and shameless. Please comment at will and with honesty.

Comments about 'Abandonne' by Shania K. Younce

  • Rookie - 3 Points Jameel Ahmed Ansari (4/17/2014 11:30:00 PM)

    I would call ths a lovely short story rather than a poem..another good work frm u. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 4, 2013


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