A Wish Poem by Suresh Dogra

A Wish

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We must grow up
But not so much
That when we look back
We are not able to see
What stands below
Where we began
And the child in us
Is crushed
By the weight of our size.

Thursday, October 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 11 August 2017

Great poem. Nicely articulated. You are a meticulous observer of human nature around you. This is today's reality. Thanks.

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Shabeeh Haider 30 October 2014

well written....Often we grow up and forget our roots. Very nicely written.

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Babatunde Aremu 30 October 2014

This is highly philosophical. We grow up forgetting our humble beginning. This is the dilema of man. May God help us not to forget our past. Thanks fr this thought provoking poem

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Soul Watcher 30 October 2014

Nice poem... well done

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