Lillian Susan Thomas


*a Waltz Wave: Loaf Of Bread - Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Loaf
of bread
makes
a song
of fragrance,
waiting
to
feed all
who hunger.
If only it
worked that way,
the world
could
be full
and hope would
waft on
winds
with bread
scent.


Comments about *a Waltz Wave: Loaf Of Bread by Lillian Susan Thomas

  • Rookie Kerry O'Connor (10/14/2009 8:20:00 AM)

    Another excellent poem full of taste and texture. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (9/30/2009 2:52:00 AM)

    Lillian, I love it! It is wonderful to read a Waltz Wave where I have not had to count the syllables.
    The fragrance and the three alliterated words waft winds with make for a great Waltz Wave. And there is a message in there too for the world. Some of the convicts that came to Australia from England in the early 1800's had only stolen a loaf of bread so they wouldn't starve. Well done!
    10 love Karin (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 7, 2009


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