Lillian Susan Thomas

*a Waltz Wave: Loaf Of Bread - Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

of bread
a song
of fragrance,
feed all
who hunger.
If only it
worked that way,
the world
be full
and hope would
waft on
with bread

Comments about *a Waltz Wave: Loaf Of Bread by Lillian Susan Thomas

  • Rookie Kerry O'Connor (10/14/2009 8:20:00 AM)

    Another excellent poem full of taste and texture. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (9/30/2009 2:52:00 AM)

    Lillian, I love it! It is wonderful to read a Waltz Wave where I have not had to count the syllables.
    The fragrance and the three alliterated words waft winds with make for a great Waltz Wave. And there is a message in there too for the world. Some of the convicts that came to Australia from England in the early 1800's had only stolen a loaf of bread so they wouldn't starve. Well done!
    10 love Karin (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 7, 2009

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