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*A Waltz Wave: Fall Leaves Fly

Fall
leaves fly
past
the bus
moving through
traffic.
A
child's face
pressed against
the window looks
out at folks -
standing
at
bus stops,
walking on
the streets -
all
blurred with
leaves.

Submitted: Monday, October 05, 2009
Edited: Friday, July 01, 2011


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  • Adeline Foster (10/22/2011 1:08:00 PM)

    Good this! Read mine - Leave Leaves -
    Adeline

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  • Ray Schreiber (2/11/2010 10:56:00 PM)

    Lillian,

    I came here to revisit some of your poems...this Waltz Wave is a fine one.

  • Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (1/23/2010 8:19:00 PM)

    I also wante to fly like these leaves. U moved my mind with ur poem... nice, excellent, fantastic but so simple imagination....

  • Susan Jarvis (10/29/2009 3:20:00 PM)

    This wonderful poem waltzes along at a breathtaking pace, drawing the reader into the swirl of of autumn leaves as the bus rolls along. You certainly know how to use this strict syllable count to optimum effect. S :)

  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (10/16/2009 7:29:00 AM)

    Simply captivating Lillian. I is like a long haiku that leaves one with a breathlessness of capturing something so beautiful that others pass by without ever knowing what they have missed out seeing. 10 love Karin

  • Meggie Gultiano (10/16/2009 5:49:00 AM)

    I love this..A nice write! ! !

  • Brenda Arroyo (10/14/2009 9:41:00 AM)

    A sweet melodic picture to my mind.

  • Kerry O'Connor (10/14/2009 8:19:00 AM)

    A fine example of this form. You have really made it your own. This is a beautifully poignant word picture.

  • Mark Nwagwu (10/13/2009 8:53:00 AM)

    slim; compact; deliberate; speedy - and it goes away, like the falling leaves of fall, a blur - bot only temporary, temporarily. Much enjoyed this, Lillian,10, not a blur; a real ten, more than 9.999 - a real 10

    mark

  • Sonya Florentino (10/6/2009 2:17:00 PM)

    very nice atmosphere...season changing....time passing....

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