A Very Thin Line Poem by Jeffrey Philip Clegg

A Very Thin Line

Rating: 5.0


When I realized I was no longer down
I swore I'd stay away
From the demon called depression
The one that holds such sway

Now that I'm back
In a deep black hole
The odyssey seems stranger

The whole time
On the edge of a cliff
There I was
In danger

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 05 February 2006

Swaying as we do from left alone to right on top.I Hope all good things for you. Love Duncan

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Scott Clegg 23 July 2005

I like the honesty of this one...The whole depression thing is a mystery...kinda one those things where you think your ok and your not, and not ok when you are...sort of a Clegg World situation...

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Uriah Hamilton 09 July 2005

A very insightful poem about depression! Thanks!

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