A Tuckingmill Bird Poem by Fay Slimm

A Tuckingmill Bird

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My heart is astir with what this morning
I caught aloft under a bluebell sky.
A bird who trills high, yet smaller than small
Is it's frame, and seemed to be making reply
To my spirit which soared as I spied crest
Of gold above darkest large eye. The park
Which graces this valley will never best
The feathered perfection I saw, marking
His tiny terrain with sublime bird-talk.
That Goldcrest at Tuckingmill crowned my walk.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 14 April 2009

Great use of enjambment in this lyrical feathered feast. Your 'bluebell sky' is particularly enchanting. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Fiona Davidson 10 April 2009

That must have been a fabulous sight Fay...birds do lift your spirits don't they...lovely write as always from your hand...Fi...10+++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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