A Star In Your Life... Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

A Star In Your Life...

Rating: 5.0


The fresh and young grape vines,
Spread on your tender heart loving,
As the day and night of the earth,
I stay in your mind as your twin soul.

The breeze picks up our love notes,
To sing the songs near the oceans and deserts,
The clouds collect our happy sweat pearls,
To decorate the mother earth, shrouded with grass.

As the roots of the banyan, let our love be strong,
Singing the softest tunes, just audible to us both,
Wingless wishes travel in the chariot of the muse,
To keep us united now and always, as the light and the shade.

We are visible when we are tied together,
At our heart, responding to each other’s needs,
Domination may hurt and lose the one, who is weak,
Excess light or shade will erase the other, leaving us alone.

My sweetheart, you are so dear to my thoughts,
Remembering our good and bad times is my amusement,
As a little ant collects, I have stored so many gems,
Those are embedded on the sky of our love field as stars.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajesh Thankappan 15 February 2014

As the roots of the banyan, let our love be strong, Singing the softest tunes, just audible to us both, A fantastic poem. The last two lines too were very catchy. I have read your poems for the first time today and look forward to read all of them.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 February 2014

As the roots of the banyan, let our love be strong, Let love be strong. Thank you.

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Lorraine Colon 13 February 2014

Lovely poem. When we love someone, what wonderful thoughts form in our minds. Words that were elusive come to the forefront to describe our emotions. Even if a loved one is far away, it is a most satisfying feeling just to think of them.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 February 2014

we are tied together, good writing my dear, I like it.

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