A Soul Reedemed From Drugs Poem by Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)

A Soul Reedemed From Drugs



By the time it all came to humanity
It all steered in my mind
That in me
An animal had been removed
To the soul
Of such my divine heart
That neither at night nor light
I was proud to be human again

I was proud to be on my feet
My mind healed healed
With human intelligence granted
After having travelled
And walk the road
That was personalised with hardship

I stormed the tendency
Of escaping dictation
Prior my soul was a slave
It lived in the fantasy world of slavery
But I cried an extent,
Yes again I got to cr myself tears

Look at me now
I am redeemed
Because I learnt
And because I observed
I was awarded the abilty
To rule and fight
The patrimonial pain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swetha Vanakayalapati 09 July 2012

i dont think i'm left with more words! ! Look at me now I am redeemed Because I learnt And because I observed I was awarded the abilty To rule and fight The patrimonial pain when it comes to the matter of pain and fight we choose pain in disguise of fight in practical themes.........may be mind has set up to stand in strands of comfort levels of pain...we need not solve a problem coz its solution might stand again as a problem blinking us! ! but its a poem of guts revealing the worshiping lies and a steady spirit to endure fighting successfully! !

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Frank Acquafredda 11 March 2012

i also like this and can also relate, i have overcome my demons as well.

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Dave Walker 18 December 2011

A great poem of overcoming, a great write.

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Ken E Hall 16 December 2011

Freedom the axis of a life granted by God worth the fight within for it, nice to read about the struggle up...regards

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Vipins Puthooran 15 December 2011

An excellent poem! ! ! ! Phenomenal write! ! ! ! Plz read my poem (addiction)

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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