A Soul Lost Poem by shzavia hill

A Soul Lost



A soul lost
A soul forgotten
Its just another day
Fifteen minutes of mourning then everything should fade away
As if your death was nothing more than the loss of something easily replaced
As if losing you is like losing sleep,
easily regained
But thats not how it is
Losing you is like losing a soul
Like being paralyzed on one side
You were my better half
You were my strength and my sanity
My emotion and my color
Now thats all drained from me
Because of a soul lost

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jim Troy 15 July 2011

You have reached the souls which lament over another whenever a death occurs. It never goes unnoticed by the driving force that is all loving. You express it quite nicely for us all to take notice and reflect......... Thank for sharing with all of us.. And sorry for your recent loss, if that is in order............ Jim Troy

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